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obiwan1120 · 01-25-2009, 08:53 PM

Jessika!
I took your advice and so far have only read parts 1 and 2. Of course I know the outcome but I have to admit the fact that Trina is laying in a heap, Ariel is unconscious and you have orgasmed also into unconsciousness as Dia fisted you, I am also pretty well spent sitting at my PC. I'll take a break for dinner and to watch (finally) the 2 hour premiere of Lost, then come back up for what I know will be a Fantastic Finish!
One thing though. You had me completely under your spell - I was convinced that Trina was your lovely daughter, and to find out that this was also a fantasy was a real heartbreaker. (SOB). In my mind I had developed a back-story where you were trying to teach poor Trina your tricks, so far unsuccessfully, over at Ultimae Surrender. She lost another bout against a woman who was built along her same lines, Bella Rossi. All of us at US enjoy seeing Trina get dominated but I for one do wish she would finally cum out on top.
As for parts 1 & 2, your descriptions of how your panties are finally ripped off, Trina's bloody nose and all the rest show that you have certainly kept up the quality of your writing.
I'm just torturing myself now building up the anticipation of the end result.
Rodger
p.s. Nice inclusion of Deborah too getting a bit of payback for being a bitch.

01-25-2009, 08:53 PM	#9 (permalink)
obiwan1120 Showing some promise Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 14	Pollfight Story - An Epic Conclusion Jessika! I took your advice and so far have only read parts 1 and 2. Of course I know the outcome but I have to admit the fact that Trina is laying in a heap, Ariel is unconscious and you have orgasmed also into unconsciousness as Dia fisted you, I am also pretty well spent sitting at my PC. I'll take a break for dinner and to watch (finally) the 2 hour premiere of Lost, then come back up for what I know will be a Fantastic Finish! One thing though. You had me completely under your spell - I was convinced that Trina was your lovely daughter, and to find out that this was also a fantasy was a real heartbreaker. (SOB). In my mind I had developed a back-story where you were trying to teach poor Trina your tricks, so far unsuccessfully, over at Ultimae Surrender. She lost another bout against a woman who was built along her same lines, Bella Rossi. All of us at US enjoy seeing Trina get dominated but I for one do wish she would finally cum out on top. As for parts 1 & 2, your descriptions of how your panties are finally ripped off, Trina's bloody nose and all the rest show that you have certainly kept up the quality of your writing. I'm just torturing myself now building up the anticipation of the end result. Rodger p.s. Nice inclusion of Deborah too getting a bit of payback for being a bitch.