Conversation Between lexman3xl55 and fallenangel
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Just try to be unpredictable and throw in some twists. Your writing style suits a short, to the point story. How about the husband turns up, that's not so unpredictable but it's what most people on this site will want to see happen, they'll also want the wife to lose. Or you could have the wife win and then return later with her husband so he sees her dominate Red. As they leave she throws Red's usual fee on the floor.
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thank you for responding trouble is i don't know what the next move is.